August 15, 2010
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ONE BLUE EYE
With one, penetrating blue eye,
I see you seeing me.
You are looking into my soul
And seeing me want you.
You see my naked desires
I’ve vainly tried to conceal.
My intentions are now exposed.
My lust for you is now exposed.
I cannot fake my “friendship” for you,
And I cannot fake my naturalness,
My unnatural cravings for your love,
For your natural reactions to my actions.
God, I am so naked in the light of that eye.
But as long as that eye does not turn away
I can only hope that I have not gone too far.
I hope it is telling me that it is all right.
It is all right for me to want you, to lust for you,
To want to possess you even for just a moment.
It is all right for me to want to give myself up
To whatever it is that you and that eye would have.
Keep looking at me as I build my confidence,
As I gain my strength back in my nakedness.
Let me straighten up and look at you in that eye
Fix your gaze on the man that you want.
I want you to want me as I want you.
To see you as you see me, in all your nakedness.
I want to see you want me, and lusting for me.
To see you eye-to-eye as two naked, desirous souls.
Curiousdwk
Comments (13)
I really enjoyed this
@godfatherofgreenbay - I’m glad you liked this. It was fun.
“Don’t make my brown eyes blue”
@llibra - ”Tell me no secrets/Tell me some lies/Give me no reasons/Give me alibis”
This is just one of our four eyes. We have the two physical eyes on our face which allow us to see in three dimensions. Then there is the eye of our rationality which allows us to look at thing rationally. And then there is the intuitive eye which allows us to look at things intuitively.
love the writing
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Sensuous and romantic.
@ZSA_MD - Thanks. I thought the kitten was sensuous and romantic too. (smile)
i enjoy reading your feedback immensely, as i enjoy all of yours. your opinion really means a lot to me and i look forward to your comments. i hope you have a wonderful week!
Flawless writing.
Eyes are the windows to the Soul.
@RestlessButterfly - I’m glad you liked this. That means a lot to me.
May we all get what we want. It should be easy, but of course it isn’t.
a beautiful pic and a simply beautiful poem…..you are amazing!