July 10, 2011
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You’re a Beautiful Person
PURSUED BY THE BLACK CAT
There is a black cat silently stalking me
But one day, I shall be the secretive stalker.
Her lusty greed has set my loins aflame
As she prowls more lordly than the sun.
So soft, she sinuously steps aside
And advances stealthily toward my back.
I feel her breath on the nape of my neck,
But it is I, this time, who has set the trap.
The hungry hunt is on as I go about,
Flayed by thick thorns and rocky path.
Feeling the glaring hot whitenoon
I spin around to see her ravenous face.
I see the blood veins shining in her neck,
Her yellow eyes and nostrils full of fire,
Her supple body twitching with hot desire.
She knows now what her dastardly fate will be.
It will be me, the hunted, who does the devouring,
As I leap upon her agile, feline body.
And wrap my controlling arms around her sleekness
And feast and gorge upon her sinewy neck.
Her monstrous mouth opens to devour me
But I swiftly shut her mouth with mine.
I taste her hot anticipating wetness
As our fiery tongues battle for supremacy.
We roll over and over alternating on top
As our flailing arms and legs entwine.
The ferociousness of our torrid passion
Knows no boundaries, no limits, no rules.
Till finally she resists my advances no more,
And willingly lets me have my way with her.
As she succumbs to my ministrations of pleasures,
And realizes the pleasure of being pleasured.
And then, when fully spent, we mutely lie,
Our arms still embracing each other,
I softly caress her with my lapping tongue
And savor the salty taste of her moist flesh.
When we prepare to go our own separate ways
We hold each other’s body tightly against our own,
Feeling our hearts beating the rhythmic message:
Maybe next time, she may be the sacred devourer.
Curiousdwk
Comments (20)
Wow. Excellent.
this is my first visit to your site. first i do like your poem, and the nights in white satin, and the embrace picture. Funny how felines can rule the heart and be cuddly much against their first instinct.
Have a beautiful day. you have quite the way with words!
@bluezenith - Welcome, and thank you. I appreciate your comments.
@songoftheheart - Thanks. It shouldn’t hurt to say “You’re a beautiful person”, but sometimes it does.
you did a lovely job with this, as you always do. The alliteration was elegant. Beautiful.
This was excellent writing here. Not only very creative but erotic as well. Nice job!!!
@The_Eyes_Of_A_Painter - Thanks. Eroticism is so often just included within the domain of the mystical and fantasy that it is often difficult to bridge it to real-world interactions.
@adventofreason - Thanks Cindi. I’m especially glad that you enjoyed this one.
Interesting take. It reminded me of the movie Nine Months when she was the bug and the mother eats the father! I don’t know why I find that so funny. =P
great work
@godfatherofgreenbay - Thanks godfather
@hesacontradiction - Maybe you have a praying mantis gene inside you if you find yourself wanting to devour your lover after having sex. (smile)
Wow David, this was hot and sensuous. Great imagery here.
@ZSA_MD - Thanks Zsa. I’m glad you liked it.
Good stuff. Hot! (He said as he fanned himself.)
@twoberry - Thanks. I figured people needed some heat inside them to counter the heat from Mother Nature outside them.
Beautifully expressed.
Just dropping by to say ‘Hi!’.
@RestlessButterfly - Thanks for dropping by to say “Hi”. Rather than leave an extended message, I’m going to say that this poem of mine wraps up what I would like to say to you right now in this comment.
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David
Curiousdwk
Softly sensual, as well as erotic. It flows beautifully & ends with just enough mystery to make one wonder if there will be a sequel. You have a marvelous talent & this has left me smiling softly. Thank you.